Gwen 3

Photography \ Figure | 05/31/08 @257 | Varutasu | critiques (6) | views (169)

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Alright, the final one of the series. I think this one is my favorite. Though I wish I had used a smaller aperture. But I'll think about that when I re-shoot this. Thank you so much everyone for all the comments through this series! It's been a lot of help for further shoots.

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moserArtist

05/31/08 @285

I don't fancy the crop in either of the 3.

I like her expression in this one.

Technically you have problems controlling the light in this one causing some bright areas on her facial side (right) and also the space on right looks bright.

Varutasu

05/31/08 @711

Thank you Moser. I agree with the light and I fixed it a little.

moserArtist

06/01/08 @331

Looks, after correction, much better!

Vasco

06/02/08 @687

Didn't see the original but I see very little issues about lighting in this, but as Patrick said, now its much better. I'm not a big fan of the crop either.

rifty

06/02/08 @854

In my eyes it is the best in terms of light.. and not too much space on the right.. but I agree with others regarding the crop.. I would like to see her hole face..

sdavis75

06/02/08 @938

Okay, I really like the concept here; you captured the texture of the makeup very well. I am not a fan of the crop, however. If you're not going to crop the subject substantially, then give it some room (in this case, at the left); otherwise it looks unintentional. I also think that a solid white or black background would give the image more punch; the shadows in the background distract from the subject.

Keep experimenting. I'll look forward to your next post.

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